Quiet Poetry Lounge : Uniting Elements

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Mar 9, 2005.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Let the heart digest
    what the mind have left
    let the body fall into a slumber
    to feel the mild caress
    open the soul spill a confess
    trust in thy savior to rest
    let the mind wave send a message
    as it gallops through fields
    see the mind no not of chains or
    earthly bounds yet life chase
    like hungry hounds

    when the spirit is in a state as this
    i work my heart / mind & soul so
    they kiss bring together happiness
    the mind is intensely sure
    yet the heart is insecure
    as the soul search for cure
    leave thy spirit in lonelyness
    succumbs to poision of lies
    come masked un-de-nounced

    Between the mindful heart
    and the spiritrual soul if they
    part a body not whole
    so i now bare secret to salivating soul
    and bring all together for whole
    as one through the mission story told.
    :thinking: :thinking: :thinking:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your mental is on a strong vibe...within pass whats lost will find through time the growth shall come...mental depth feeling you poet

    Angel
     
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    Your spirits seens to be soaring high on a daily ..and that's a good thing...
    here's hoping it travels in packs.
    thanks for the inspiration lay.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u know Angel if u lost one it's just not completed
    til the whole body understand and floats together
    we at times become apart from the thoughts of the mind
    and what the heart feels as the inner soul depth compose
    it's emotions and spiritually da spirit wonders thankz sis a million
    mo.luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sista queentswana the journey is fulfilling as we all try
    to stay together move together as one whole mind body and soul
    so the spirit can be free thank thee very much

    moving leaving mo.luv
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uniting all these elements will truly set one free. Sometimes a heart can feel, what hasn't yet been proven to the mind. You went deep here, made me do some thinking too. Flow on...
     
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    yes watz it can make one really think and how to try and place
    them all in a togetherness thankz sis for the love & support
     
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