Black Poetry : United

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Aprofoundman, Mar 9, 2004.

  1. Aprofoundman

    Aprofoundman Active Member MEMBER

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    We can’t be stopped.
    Each and everyone of us has a heart.
    Our souls will never be destroyed.
    We’re people of color.
    The lives that we live everyday are precious.
    We will not live in fear.
    United we stand.
    What we need to do is come together as one.
    We all can make a difference.
    In this world today we deal with hate.
    Also we come across poverty.
    Another problem that occurs is violence.
    There’s no need for race.
    Diversity needs to take place.
    Stop all the bombing.
    Think about what goes on in this world.
    You can’t go around putting one another down.
    Lend a hand and give credit to our people.
    This world could be a much better place.
    Who can we turn to?
    All we can do is pray.
    Don’t take life for granted.
    Live your life day by day.
    In life we make our own choices.
    I would like for you to take this poem into consideration.
    I didn’t do this poem just to write it I wrote it from my heart.
    Sincerely,
    Yours
    Derick Bryant
    ©Copyright
     
  2. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If the truth was every spoken...it was spoken in depth in this poem....much love for this fo sho'
     
  3. Aprofoundman

    Aprofoundman Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love Foxi.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I am glad your heart was opened
    to receive...and to share
    thanks for the poem
     
  5. Aprofoundman

    Aprofoundman Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love.
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And i just did ...

    and you are good.....

    Prophets words :flamet: with a motion of love behind it...
    Keep writting poet...


    and you are probebly are here for a while but i still say HI :wave:welcome


    Love Libertylady
     
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    Ujima Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So true! So true! Keep it real!

    Stay focused!
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice poem
    posed well
    flow on
    :angel1:
     
  9. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I...

    just wish I could paste this onto the ski for all to see.
    The message, deep and right on point.
    Way to bring it ! :spinstar:
    Nita
    :heart:
     
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