Black Poetry : Unintentionally

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trapped in open space
    piercing
    eyes upon me
    burn like salt on a
    fresh wound....

    air dissipates
    I labor to breathe
    reaching grapping

    ~anything
    to break my fall

    I don't want to fall....


    ~I do~

    But I can't...

    ~It hurts~


    It did before....


    unintentionally~ I hurt you

    to....

    deliberately~break my fall.

    Does that make any sense?



    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmmmmm...

    Deep scibe here!!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that rebounding **** is phucked up...isn't it?

    we get so caught up in getting rid of our pain that we fall into situations that are no good for us...just for some relief. only to walk away, later...making that third party feel as miserable as we did.

    makes perfect sense.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coco~

    Ma I feel the emotion in this hea and I gotta give you madd applause! This peice was simply brill!

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jr.


    ...it makes absolute perfect sense to me.

    i'm feelin' ya flow my sistah! (fa sho)

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  6. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coco~
    This here meant a lot to me. Describes a situation I know very well, and I don't think i could have said it any better. Preciate this a whole hell of a lot!
     
  7. poeticdelight

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    Coco,

    you know i love u like a play cousin girl

    keep posting the tyte flows

    poeticd
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    madd sistahly love

    Rashad~ Nice to see you. Thanks for reading me. :)

    Baller~ Glad you see the perfect sense in it. ;)

    Reas~ You do? You know....you're too good to me. Thanks :wink:

    GA~ Absolute perfect sense? Good.....that means I'm sane. :laugh:

    Danilyn~ I'm glad you received something from this. :)

    Poeticd~ Aw snaps!. I'm touched. Thanks girl. :)

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
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  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa

    give us some o' dat coco flow again...
    this was nice (as usual)
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J'hiah and Sherykah

    Thank you both for the love.
    It's returned :)

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