Black Poetry : Uninhibited

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticallyJust, Dec 12, 2003.

  1. PoeticallyJust

    PoeticallyJust Member MEMBER

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    His words move me
    His voice soothes me
    He takes me there, his aura gives me wings
    With each confession of his soul my heart sings
    I ascend fly into his sky and get lost there
    Not I can’t find my way lost, because his way is my way
    What can I say but I’m ready to receive him
    Giving that love from deep within my soul
    My Strong Black Man in complete control
    I feel as if I need to let go
    Let the rivers of my love flow
    Just to let this man know
    I love who he is
    What he is and who he will be
    My mind is full with the possibilities
    As he enters my meadow and fills it with Sun
    My love surrounds him and we become one
    I look into his eyes and in them I see
    Martin, Malcolm Garvey and me.
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the vison in your poetry is deep
    very nice
    Peace
     
  3. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem is so good
    Im placing it on my wall
    Thank you poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice vision of dis tyte scribe u vibing
    lovin the flow
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice...likes this