Black Poetry : Unhonest LOve

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dlovely, Dec 21, 2005.

  1. Dlovely

    Dlovely Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can’t seem to find you in my heart.
    You're just not there,
    I can’t sit here and be unpleased
    Thinking about why I have you here.

    You say you love me,
    But my heart pushes you away
    I think I love you, but it's not the truth
    Everyday in my heart you seem to fade.

    I’m trying to stay true to myself
    I hope you can see
    I can’t always listen to your emotions
    And be as you want me to be.

    I can’t help it but to love you
    Love you Unhonest
    Love that isn’t honest
    Can’t flow through my heart constantly

    You’re not my first,
    First boy who trapped me in their spell
    To the point where I cry at night
    That I have my own little shell.


    Boy I can say I love you
    But I lie to your face with a pound of shame
    Our relationship
    Was all a big game?

    Don’t get me wrong
    I feel real bad
    But I warned your heart before
    to save it from being sad.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling all dis here , kinda take me back to a time
    once before ..............
     
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    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very universal, I'm sure everyone who understands love feels the entire anatomy of this piece here. Nice work.
     
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    Dlovely Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thks you guys .I am blessed to know that It ain't junk
     
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    wow can relate to this one. thanks for sharing this flow on poet.:star: :nuts:
     
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    This could never be junk.
     
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    Is you doing your thang poet
    I am loving this poet
     
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