Black Poetry : unfurled

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  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    :thinking: will my secrets be unfurled
    Lost in melancholys trances
    Memories so deep they disturb my sleep

    Loves longings through my mind thronging
    Temptations desires..... imaginations fires
    burn Into me ....screws lascivious views
    Thrust pound and swarm swallowing my mind
    caught up in them I drown

    thoughts like a Melody's sweet
    soft as babies feet
    Enchant bewitch silken tones
    Encase my mind in a musical sheet
    Sooth & caress me
    chocolate smooth to passion groans
    i cant wait ontil this is more than a phone....
    call ...tell me more tell me more
    Fill my empty heart for evermore
    Tell me what I long to hear
    Oh give me more my lovely dear

    from turgid nipples tips
    too sexy ghetto lips,she beckons me
    Come my love
    her Angelic voice sages me
    Come thy love
    **** ...she melts my soul, burns up my resolve

    see...i have struggled though loveless nights and ye
    Sweet passions storm up from love which now can be
    Light rays began to curl star beams to unfurl
    Whirling plunging around we did spin
    "Cum in your Love my love"
    Circling on the walls of night with the frothing light we did skim
    Stab
    Groan
    Moan
    Her hair flowed out and span about
    Caught creatures noises
    On the bubbles of light
    Lingering voices
    On the black wall of night

    Oh God,...... she was
    pucking the hell- out....
    of me
    i was all up in that clam-like shell-out...


    I heave and groan in her sea of fire

    Thick spurts the white flame
    Heated with desire
    Deep within her sweaty frame
    Her eyes like starry nights
    Voice like summer ghetto fights
    Flashed around in the void resound
    Arms outspread
    I clasped her head
    Feeling the penetration so deeply im within
    I know there's no way this could be a sin,, but ????

    will my secrets be unfurled
    Lost in melancholys trances
    Memories so deep they disturb my sleep
    Even if I can't have you here with me right now,
    I'll wish to hold you in my arms...
    secrets be unfurled
    Lost in melancholys trances..of u



    hookup.... :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking:
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very passionate flow
    A love poem
    for someone special to thee mmm.:)
    wonderful flow
    very lovely

    Blue:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling da heat off dis one
     
  4. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    thank u :drums:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    like a drum roll of passion and musical sweetness in rapture
    what a mix keep it banging !!!!!
     
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    Now, I wonder whom this is for? :) Desiring more than merely a voice over the phone, counting the days til the two of you can touch. You conveyed that feeling passionately. Flow on brotha poet.
     
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    very passionate flow
    likes this vibe
    peace
    angel
     
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    Love…

    I have always respected your gift for writing…
    Now…
    What I never thought could be written with “fire”…has been done
    The impossible has taken place…
    Somehow you’ve harnessed the elements of this world…water, wind, oxygen…
    and even fire inside your soul…your tongue…and ultimately inside your pen…

    These things combined with a level of passion I never thought could be mirrored…
    Continuously blows my mind…every time I read you

    Your ability to be so “diverse”…but yet master every subject, style…and even your most
    Intimate thoughts and desires…leave me speechless

    …This piece was like LAVA, taking over a helpless village

    And I….

    I…my heart, body and soul…was that village…forever living at the foot of your volcano…

    *whew *…..lawd :great:

    :hearts1: Let me get to it….Nothing this phenomenal should be left unreciprocated… :hearts1:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    …of divine origin
    Contorting my spirit & pulling
    the duality of my Pisces in sync…
    our thoughts combine
    until my voice sinks
    into…soft cries of intimacy
    and muted rapture…
    yearning…
    I find myself crooning your name
    …in the twilight of your ecstasy
    My fingertips laying against my delicate throat
    As if…
    To ease the heat that rises
    Over my body and face
    Your unfurled secrets
    Expose my weakness and growing addiction …for you

    Burn marks on the inner thighs of my essence
    your subatomic prose…goes
    From zero to 180…in a matter of 60 seconds or less…
    I’m counting down the minutes…the days
    Of having you next to me
    …because that place…that place
    Between love and lust, where we exist
    With feverishly hungry souls
    And storms brewing on fingertips
    And tongues
    Is imminent and ….love
    Was inevitable…
    As time loses…time
    We get closer to the fulfillment
    Of what we both cling so desperately to

    Your seed growing hellishly inside me…
    I stand in the morning air…
    And let my bare feet touch the dew
    To cool the insane fever
    …which can’t be tamed, until we
    Are palm to palm…

    ……………..I’m waiting
    We shall unfurl
    In unison… :donttell: :slobber: :bullseye:
     
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    *sigh* smh
    *closing the door and pullin the curtains so the neighbors dont see and complain...again*
    Goodness gracious hehehe *giggles*
    you two are the cutest thing since footie pajamas lol

    I no longer resort to acknowledging just one of you
    because it is clear that your souls feed off of each other
    and one should not and can not be without the other :)
    and it is beautifully romantically LOVE
    :)
    now stop doin that in front of the window b4 the neighbors chiren pass by again and learn somethin they werent spose to know smh hehehe
    :grouphug: