Black Poetry : Unfortunate future

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Dec 15, 2007.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I should have known
    i saw all the signs
    and still i continued to believe
    in love, in family, in you
    and,
    now we're through

    five years, two kids
    what am i to do?
    i sit and cry
    i wonder why
    but still nothing changed
    the past is gone
    covered in deceit and lies
    all these truths you hide
    i don't understand
    was nothing you said true
    i thought you were mine
    the kids thought so too
    thought we were building
    to tomorrow and not running
    from last night
    it's just not right
    what you put me through
    and all the things you do
    continue to smirk and laugh
    cause yesterdays the past
    im done
    its over
    im through
    for forty years at every happy event
    its unfortunate i will have to see you
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The disbelief and hurt that your family life as you've known it has ended, plus knowing that you will still have to see him on occasion, and muddle through some how. It will take time to be even somewhat at ease with this. I felt the ache all through this.
     
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    Hi Randee
    Your poem is very heartfelt.
    Your words are touching deeply
    It is hard indeed. Much love to you
    dear poet, you are not alone.
    Keeping the inking dripping sis

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes you just would like to....:puke2: ......either willingly or being forced to see someone.....Who more than does not tickle you fancy
    Flow on Randee
     
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