Black Poetry : UnFoRgEtAbLe

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Moments of lovin
    days with huggin
    nights of cuddlin
    passion of rubbin
    tender caressin
    mentally confessin
    deep desires
    unforgetable love
    how our bodies mend
    and fall into sexual trend
    yet stay faithful from sin
    so unforgetable
    how u moan my name
    as i whisper to tame
    the way we set da flame
    never betrayed or blame
    our love real not a shame
    still i call ya body to claim
    unforgetable
    as we cross da starz
    far beyond da house of marz
    above the bliss to orbit
    as i hit u like da arrow of cupid
    with my compassion
    and covering affection
    just unforgetable love
    from da orbs of ya essence
    da depth of smile
    as we roam da galaxy of miles
    my love drift deeper
    so unforgetable ;)

    A Dyamondluv forget me not"
    Nu~wave~Ink Creation
    CopyRight © Da $R
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Full of the bliss
    of tenderness
    a love such as this
    is unforgetable
    loving without
    physical touch
    spiritual love
    brimming with such
    unforgetable
    fire
    desire
    and passion
    igniting into
    a meteor of delight
    for me and you
    as we whisk thru the night
    upon a heavenly constellation
    we continue on our destination
    to unforgetable....love

    This unforgetable flow was out of this world.
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:unforgettable

    Dang! I couldn't stop reading this poem. Very Nice.
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful poem!
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Exceptionally creative piece :toast:
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is people like you that make me want to get better cause this piece here was off da chain. And thats real. Peace

    Mannie
    Host and poet of the Verbal High
    www.theverbalhigh.com
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    call my name in heaven's wind
    as our love grow we become one
    I am loving this RICH baby loving it!!!!


    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz for the drop on dis unforgetable piece

    thankz poetrymama i try happy u like what's so unforgetable

    thankz wisdom7 it was one i will treasure

    thankz Godssoulja it was an unforgetable moment i vision

    thankz defiantson big ups happy u like surely i'll visit

    thankz Angel when the unforgetable lay it's a sweet memory
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what makes this so unforgetable is not the love
    but how u love and felt the love's tingle as u
    think back it become an unforgetable treasure
    and a place in the heart .....how many know
    that feeling that's untouched mentally as physically
    through a spiritrually faze of love it's UNFORGETABLE.

    I want to thank every poet / reader who felt the
    unforgetable feeling and the love on this treasure piece
    Thank u family for the support :ilu: all