Black Poetry : unfinished 2007

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Dec 18, 2006.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know something is wrong
    three months have past
    no calls, it's not uncommon to go weeks,
    but months . . .
    my birthday,thanksgiving too
    Christmas is coming and you haven't
    called to inquire about boo
    i have no way to reach you
    no way to find out if you're okay
    in your line of work
    i worry each day . . .

    but, you've always said
    im alright on my own
    never asking for money
    or minutes for a phone
    my heats always on
    and there is food in the fridge
    i don't scream or beat on the kid
    so, we're easy to forget
    unlike these other babies mama's
    i don't know why you always talking
    about you hating the drama
    you run to their cribs fixing their **** . . .

    since i'm the one you run to
    to lay your head when your lifes chaotic
    i try to not stress you by explaining my needs,
    but, i can't continue to not know day to day
    what you're doing, more importantly that your okay
    so, my 2007 demands are easy enough . . .

    i need a man i don't have to worry about
    but who worries about me
    and not about my daily needs
    you're right, my heat will never be shut off
    my phone number has never had to change
    but i need a man who will be there any way
    i need a man who wants to profit and
    prosper in all aspects of life
    who wants to see a son grow into a man
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent expression of peace, Randee.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well stated and said feeling all this peaceful spat
     
  4. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats wat im talkin bout my sista...you need a man not a boi..lol
    this flow was on da real
    so flow on wit nonstop

    blackluv and bp
     
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