Black Poetry : Unfaithful II

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  1. PrincessFlowz

    PrincessFlowz Active Member MEMBER

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    This is a follow up to my recent poem "Unfaithful"



    I was never worth your love
    I blinded you with my smiles
    Made you susceptible to my selfishness
    I made love to you with my kind words
    Made you orgasm from my smiles
    But I was never worth your love
    I was the one who was insincere
    I was exactly what I feared
    I’m the one that’s making you cry
    To lay with another and cause a storm
    I tore this relationship to pieces
    I was never worth your love
    I made us like this…..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!
    yet deep within ya worthy
    from da soul ya worthy
    what was done is of myth
    ya worthy

    i like dis very nice flow keep scribing
     
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    My sister this is deep
    I feel your vibe
    And the tension
    You release
    In the flow of life
    your are worthy
    living and learning
    wonderful flow
    let it pour
    Peace
     
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    you put deep emotion into this:) I like it
     
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    Thanx...Rich, Bluewater and my gurl Swt....I appreciate the feedback....although this is the last poem I'll be posting for awhile....Aight so I'll holla at the fam lata. :)
     
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