Black Poetry : Unexplained Travels

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    His aura is green
    nurturing and warm
    Welcoming and comfortable
    a port in the storm

    He gives off green energy
    promoting growth all around
    Giving new life with his touch
    causing roots to germinate underground

    He emitted a silent silhouette
    deeper than olive or jade
    He became personified in a caress
    as loving tactile impressions were made

    With eyes at rest, his form appeared
    within a veiled mask of greenery
    determined, yet sweet, he loved me
    amid the murky midnight scenery

    Spirits appear in various forms
    and in many colors of the rainbow
    Who knew he'd reveal himself so, this
    green blanketed shadow, his aura, aglow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    She comes in da crystal shine
    under da glow of blazzin tyme
    where da harvest a-loom
    cascading da glow wit tune

    reviling self by the image of love
    at da place heavenly above
    i knew she was there beside me
    beammin a sweet green blanket
    just for me

    I love this piece it had me like in a field of warmth and love wow !!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is the reality
    of how he let feelings show
    he had the luster of his worth
    in the grassy earth of his glow
    This must have been his way
    of letting me know
    his love

    Thank you Rich, happy you felt the warmth.
     
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    most welcome ....surely one's love rips in many wayz to be known this just
    one of them thy eyez see and ears hear .
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Surely, in addition to this, there are many ways one shows love. Much appreciated, Rich.
     
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    Simply Beautiful Sister Watz!

    So vivid and yet mysterious!
    It just wisp the imagination
    off on a journey through
    the heart-songs of Watz.


    Loved it!

    :heart:
     
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    um

    you wouldn't began to understand how these lines are almost word to the life

    man poet you did it again

    you took it to the depths

    where few can truly navigate

    such a beautiful strong read here poet

    so in tune so in depth
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's so kind of you to say Purple, thank you. And happy you're treating us to your poetry again, sis!
    I am humbled that you saw such depth within my words, So'ja. Thanks a million.
     
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    great rhythm, Watz...it starts with a small, but meaningful opening, then it just blossoms...i like the metaphoric use of green with a deep man. I like the veiled mysterious-ness of the entire work.

    it's just brilliant. shock and awe indeed.
    you continue to amaze.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad you appreciated my use of green in this piece, as well as the mysterious vibe. You certainly humble me poet, thank you ever so much abstract.
     
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