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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jul 7, 2005.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A whisper in the night
    The dawn's true early light
    The innocence of a baby's
    gurgle and coo
    The secret meaning behind
    "I Love You"
    The scent of renewal after
    a saturating rain
    The jewels in that pot of gold
    whose luster is too brilliant to explain
    The delicate petals of a magenta
    tiger lily, so exotic
    The words that seemingly flow
    out of his psyche, so hypnotic
    The passion that he exudes
    naturally, so erotic
    An essence that stepped out
    of a midsummer night's dream
    The regal presence that has tapped
    me on the shoulder, or so it may seem
    The sensual kiss...
    that quenches the thirst of passion
    that exists no matter which way
    I earnestly fashion
    the words...the precise words
    are simply unobtainable
    For it is impossible to explain
    the unexplainable
     
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    Correct you are...I've been there so many times. I like the way you layed this out to us, thanks
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well said , that one will be a treasured keep sake and forever fall
    upon wit grace this piece was da face i place in vision of thee ..........

    a masterpiece of expression Watz ...wow !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you queent for letting me know you liked the way I flowed with this, appreciated sista.
    Your response humbles me, really, and renders me speechless. So I'll just simply say, thank you so much Rich.
     
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    likewise it took me there i just love this piece had to read it again u know ...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich for telling me that it took you to that place, your words mean so much.
     
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    This is awesome! Your descriptive language also "took me there."

    I can wholly agree to the "unexplainable!"

    ....makes me think of Natalie Cole's "Mr. Melody."
     
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    beautiful thanks for sharing...
     
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    I call that poetry
     
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    Imagining your words is always a high! Been missing them :)
     
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