Black Poetry : Unexpectedly Drawn To Love...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unexpectedly Drawn to Love:

    I gotta take you through a little process
    of the way I fell in love
    was unexpectedly drawn in offense
    twas in the hands of the man above
    I did not realize I ready to receive it
    but I guess God knew it was time
    I did not know if I could anxiously retrieve it
    but I did in the knick of time

    I gotta take you on a little journey
    of the time I fell in love
    was unexpectedly blinded and couldn’t see
    he was the one that I truly loved
    I dodged and ran and fled the feeling of sincerity
    until one day it knocked me down
    and I surrendered unto its youthful therapy
    it was the one that wore the crown

    I gotta lead you on a priceless journey
    that I discovered through my shattered heart
    it’d been so broken and torn so unfairly
    at first I didn’t see the greatness of his art
    a ruined mind and body covered this soul of mine
    screaming to be lifted up
    and now I see that the Lord sent him to fill the time
    so that we may both endure until our time is up...
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOVE IS THE POWER

    The journey of love has a tour guide like no other,
    The sights are tight, the mood- just right!


    1poetsought ~
     
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    And that I declare is true love! Its a beautiful thing, that which you feel...


    I'm just sayin...
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thass love...and so is this poem.

    sean.revisiting.evolved.
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody....yeah this is true love....and i'm truly happy :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love is grand da power it pose is awesome
    true love vow unto two happiness shine through
    love dis piece
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that is so true Rich the power love can have is overwhelming sometimes...
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaay LovelyGoldenOne :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    Thanks for joining us and sharing this beautiful flow!

    We'd love to hear you speak it on the mic ... www.************ ...
    our very own voice chat! Please join us.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks...i sure will think about doin' that... :)
     
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    cross ova lovely we be flow da mic hear & speak in vibe
     
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