Black Poetry : unemployed

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Dec 19, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i saw a dream hovering among the clouds
    with no name
    looking for a home
    it led me to an unemployment line
    where other dreams held applications
    looking for work
    i ask why the line was so **** long
    stretching beyond
    beyond
    the cherub behind the counter
    said "too many people have ceased
    to dream and choose too live death instead"

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Only a true poet like yourself can bring it like this!!!!
    "The wisdom of unemployment lines"!!!!!!
    Even when you're handling the business of living...even as you stand patiently in line.....you SEE vertical visions!!!

    too tight!!

    *longitudinal-flow*

    :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    verb

    inside ya dream u lay out much reality
    well dreamed poe!:D
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo

    re: Income Determines the OUTCOME

    PEACE
     
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