Black Poetry : Undying Bond....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Jul 20, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Floating on the sands of time
    Cross the river blue on
    Cascading water falls
    Sit You and I
    So far but yet together
    Holding a bond that’s twisted and unclear
    What we have is so rare
    How do we dare?
    The friendship was built
    The love grew cross our souls
    As our hearts play
    Motions rolling
    Fixing a broken dream
    Holding on to a piece
    Lost of time
    Lost in love
    Lost
    Lost……
    A dream with no end
    Invasion of the path of being true
    with fears...
    Rays of tears pour
    Like a thunderstorm from heaven
    Pain strikes and the river flows a little deeper
    ………each time.


    (C) Poetry by an Angel​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this came out smooth and water fall
    down to da page sweetly feeling ya
    on dis one very nice scribe sistah.
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply Beautiful Angel.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply state, beautifully written and meant!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very touching
    sometimes friendships
    taken unexpected
    turns...but it doesn't
    diminish the love...

    Nice flow...
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So much ease to this piece. I liked the way it flowed.
     
  7. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man,I totally tuned D'angelo out...ooooh i love it when we're cruisin' togethaaaa.....you simply flowed with ease I love it....... :luv:
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$...QQ you feeling me? i likes when you be feel me..:wink:
    friendship is hard to find these days a true one anyway.....
    thank you for the love and support i so love it from you!!!!

    jazzymoonchild.... :thanks:

    PropheticNsyght... :thanks:

    angelicsage..so true indeed the bond holds no matter...thank you for the love on dis

    watzinaname.... :thanks:

    SensualReality...lil sis you always place a smile on my face...thanks for the love and support.....

    Peace Yall
    Angel
     
  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds so much like you're "on the wings of love" ...and friendship. this is a very nice piece, well done.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u think dat's love check dis out !!!!
    lol most welcome sistah friends indeed
    when one in need i come to please ya
    flow is phat and all dat ya know ........
     
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