Black Poetry : Undue Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Aug 26, 2014.

  1. 1poetsought

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    Devils can't destroy them
    gods commune with God
    The ghetto survives
    all but sabotage

    Shimmy don't equate
    to what I'm about...
    neither do blunts
    turnt-up ~
    a notch

    Black
    Nat Turner
    was up for a fight
    bad behavior calls for a riot

    Slack
    self-hatred
    plagues us alright
    dire delights in undoing our plight


    Darryl Abdu Omari
    aka 1poetsought ~ Hands Up
     
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    Uhhhhhhhhhhh Weeeeeeeee, say that 1poetsought, real tight with so many truths, across the board, you dang near hit 'em all:

    ... The ghetto survives

    ... don't equate to what I'm about...

    ... Nat Turner was up for a fight

    ... bad behavior calls for a riot


    ... self-hatred plagues us alright

    ... dire delights in undoing our plight



    Undue Me





     
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    Undue Me is just another masterpiece you've written 1poetsought, keep 'em coming my brother friend; you are much appreciated.