Black Poetry : undressing...the end of my day.

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i woke...
    to a chorus of
    HELLO's
    as
    the
    morning's sunrise
    crept through the
    window{less} blinds
    of {out of touch} eyes
    signifying
    the noon
    of my life time
    as
    the sun and clouds
    played
    hide and seek
    'til sunset
    when i
    undressed
    the end of my day
    naked
    i stood {as prey}
    under cloudless skies
    one hundred
    fifteen
    billion stars
    and i
    alone
    under the moon light's gleam
    where stars
    sprinkled the heavens
    welcoming
    a body
    home
    {to sleep}
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BALLER MAN!

    THISWAS FELT DEEP WITIN MY SOUL
    TOGETHER WE STAND BRUTHA
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cindy...

    i see we be star-gazing together:)...THANKS for the read.

    $$RICH$$...good to see you in flight, again, my brutha. here's to standing on the front lawn...heads held high. THANKS for reading me.

    One.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    B.


    ...i'll be thinking of you tonyght...
    as i undress for bed under the
    stars of a Georgia summer nyght...
    & i'll remember that we'll be sleeping
    underneath the same sky... :)

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
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    baller...

    this was such a delicate and beautiful peace..reading this one by candlelight..and burning jasmine scented incense...

    beautiful b...just beautiful

    *clothes-ing*

    :toast:
     
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    a little sad

    beautiful feelings displayed, but also a touch of lonliness...
    we all reside under the same stars..think of it when you get too lonely...

    K
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunshyne...

    what a beautiful thought.:) THANK YOU.

    Huntress...candlelight and jasmine scented incense...soft music in the background...a glass of bubbly...a beautiful setting for a midnight meeting, under the stars.:)

    Kitana...there's not always lonliness in being ALONE...but i would gladly share my stars with you. THANKS FOR THE READ.

    One.