Black Poetry : undone liquid dreams

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these words on the tip of my tongue
    drip into my fingers as i scribe
    yet undone liquid dreams
    through my thought
    through my heart
    these images against my
    closed eyelids
    .......forbbiden....
    these words spoken out of my mouth
    .......vexed.........

    these undone liquid secrets
    these undone liquid dreams

    float aimlessly to create
    syllables.....vowels.....adjetives.....nouns.....verbs.....prefixs
    then my undone liquid dreams
    are not undone anymore.
     
  2. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I heard dat ma!!!
    Flow on wit cha bad self!!! :)

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    Ur style is so unique and captivatingly beautiful in its simplistic flow! Loving this!
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi,

    This is a very nice flow!! I like it!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    dang, this was tyte.....as i watched all the drippage going on i was feelin it :) "Cuz Poetry just flows easy, like water"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribe ya pen on a role
    let da ink drip
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx fam just tryin to spread da love,
    through my poetic expression.
     
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