Black Poetry : UNDERWORLD play pit

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    once ova
    deep inside
    the pits
    of rapture
    da dooms day
    of captivity
    dark sahdows
    play entering
    the motal mindz
    of destructional
    desires
    the wrongdoes
    now afraid
    the backstabers
    worried
    the liers
    tongue twisted
    mix emotions
    loom from da pits
    wit all doubts
    hearts stop
    blood become cold
    love lost
    now only to self
    u wonder why
    as the game just
    get started in the
    pits of the underworld
    da darkness of da
    death angel
    ya soul weaved in
    da web of the naked eye
    of the dark one himself
    u seek reality from a myth
    that's really yo reality of
    who's playin who
    looking outward for light
    only da cover of da play
    shadows around
    it's ova no turning back
    for he;'s here on da land
    from da underground
    seeking
    watching
    waiting
    sleep in da light forth da light is the key!
    Da UnderWorld play pit calling
    don't answer
    for it's doom day
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Rich....

    nice, bruh. Beware...beware...beware.

    :toast:
     
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    oh my goodness
    the rapture of the
    underground...

    this is off the scales....
    i was scared to reply...
    tight drop........
    posed well
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    money indeed it's now under seige

    angel ....it's a scary feeling knowing
    da pits calling to play where there is
    no return

    Da light is the key keep the lamps on !

    thanks u two for the look inside the walls of da underworld pit
     
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    Dare I say, the pit looks deeper day by day...looking toward the light....
     
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    the hole has no bottom
    the darkness is cold
    and now the red eyez
    looking in the web to
    feast on the bite of da
    souls who fear for it knowz
    yes deeper then one may know

    don't look down face the light

    thankz for the peep in da underworld pit
     
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    da pits of da underworld is callin
    for the sinners of life the betrayal
    of corruption the evil that looms
    the land for the play pits awaits
    and the darkside eyes watch
    come into the trap of destruction
    if u dare ......
    the light is the only way to stay away
    watch how u turn off the lights tonight
    da underworld seeking revenge
     
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