Black Poetry : underworld of destruction

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    From deep down where no hearts live
    in the deep darkside of the underworld
    like da streets of hellbound of sorrow
    none hope da feelin of destruction is cast
    by the handz of betrayal by da tongues of those
    who dare face the reality from the underworld
    lay a mixture of false tales told under rays

    Inside the glass looking a reflection of mirror image
    of no true grasp just hopes as one dip in the pool of
    corruption the death angel rise from the ground of
    lost dreams known as da underworld as it cast
    da spell on the living beckoning in like a wheel
    spinning in a upward pace lurking souls to feast on

    The path way of pits created by da human flesh
    da immortal looms waitin, watchin, seekin
    a mind/ a soul/ a heart to spoon da dreams into
    a bed of neverland lay a kiss of hot viper
    a painful desort of kiss under da ground a world
    of darkness crush the wild seeds no one can define it
    it's a battle of worlds beyond a war of right & wrong
    a tongue dat speaks or hush, underworld is no joke
    a bomb set to exsplode

    with every tic of the clock every toc on da walls
    it looms in da mind to a rebirth of destruction
    corrupted corruption lick it's chops on the
    ones in the dark stay in the light so u don't go under
    by the rock of da craddle from da UNDERWORLD

    the underground files
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep scribe, the underground sounds like a place that never sees the light of day....until something cracks its foundation.
     
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    a deep deep read
    i likes the underground flowz
    this was posed well
    but i am gonna stay in the light
    tight write!!!!
    Angel
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    watz from the underground is darkness of destruction where feets
    like a hammer keep stepping in the same place it cracks and
    unleash da world of corruption the only way to get away is stay
    in the light and sometime it can't help when the darkside is awaken.......Thankz for the visit into the files of the underworld

    angel.....indeed the self destructional maze is placed
    the groundz rumble and the darkside is like tales of da crypt
    upon da living forth it's a danger zone the light is best so the
    face can't be seen but sometime it will cross into the light to
    seek it's prey .....
    Thanks 4 da visit to the darkside of da underworld
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a whole different side of you, $$RICH$$, and I like it. you could read the underworld to be many places dependin on your perspective, couldn't ya. tight write, baby
     
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    gempis the darkside of the underworld
    is a place of mental mind goes and the
    birth of a corrupted cast is set forth in a mission
    that aims directly on the betrayal souls

    thankz 4 visiting the underworld darkside
     
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    I like this Brother...
    and your closing stanza says so much
    we must stay near the light in order
    to not be drawn in to the negativity that
    spews from the underworld...
    if you see a sinking ship...
    you'd better jump...because
    the toungues of some are "sharp"
    and sometimes there's a lot
    of evil in peoples hearts...

    this was very thought provoking
    Excellent read...brother
     
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    indeed ya well on point sistah angelicsage
    when the rumble of earth is felt the underworld
    is awaken and seek souls to feed on for a revenge
    the light is the key like a ship before it go down
    u can jump aboard in a life saver jacket ......

    Thankz for the visit in the underworld of da darkside
     
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    the "undaground files" are not for the timid thas for sure...
    this is a different perspective for you brotha but i like shows balance
     
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    indeed it is the twisted affects
    of the underworld of corruption

    thanks 4 da visit inside the loop
     
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