Black Poetry : underwater indulgence

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  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Crimson vapors hovered over the jacuzzi that night,
    from rays refracted by a clear moonlight.
    Soon sight changed vantage points,
    and I was focused on your outlandish joints.
    Bathing suit was barely there,
    and barely contained your derriere.
    Your body was bangin’ beyond compare,
    and even though I tried, I couldn’t help but stare.
    I noticed water droplets were clinging to your flesh,
    even they could see your beauty,
    so to hold on they tried their best.
    I brought your body to my chest,
    and attempted to catch your breathe
    and when I did, I sort of savored it,
    it was like our love had favored it.
    I enjoyed it so I stayed a bit,
    locked up in a flawless kiss.
    I closed my eyes and all I saw was bliss,
    and opened them up to an image that was heaven sent.
    Hell bent on having it,
    we went at each other like savages.
    Those primitive desires would soon make way
    for a display of spine tingling tongue play.
    I matched the rhythm of my speech muscle to the song that you heart played,
    a serenade that continued until the mystery of you sprayed.
    Your own wetness overshadowed that of the water we dwelled in,
    although we were fully submerged,
    I was dry until we began
    to move closer within.
    We rocked to a beat that caused ripples in the water’s surface,
    even though it was derived in lust,
    it was received strictly for love’s purpose.
    Diabeticly sweet,
    making love in liquid sheets
    finally we both peak,
    love strong
    but flesh weak.



    Copyright 2005
    © Ramarla D. Rozier
    Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop ya pen on fire today
    lovin the vibe
     
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    This was sweetly devine, and sensually laid. Flow on brotha. Very nice to read you again poet!
     
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    Whoa!! This is drop dead sexay, baby. Encore! :wine:
     
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    Awesome love scene,
    Made for a "King and Queen" ...for heaven is where you layed, played and strayed.
    tight piece ...here's to :wine: the love yall shared ...lustfully
     
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    Diabeticly sweet,
    making love in liquid sheets


    that line is ill son...keep flossin & flexin
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Poetry that causes one to loose composure and just drool :slobber:


    :hot::hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot::hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:​
     
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