Black Poetry : Understanding

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Pi5Fs, Feb 14, 2007.

  1. Pi5Fs

    Pi5Fs Member MEMBER

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    Flames torch Piff, inhalin myself thro coarsed veins with my hands chained

    back 2...

    i'm back on da same porch, with worse caine, standin inside my man's rage
    -i spend my dreams so i'll have memories-
    materialism giving me tender meanin, always plannin 10 more schemez
    because i realize reality, its either them or me
    that why i love a gangbanger and ride with 3 time felons
    while the corrporate industry think its nothing they got crime selling
    only times tellin
    so **** it, i'mma juss thug it
    while the government is spreadin diseases 2 da public

    come back 2...

    now i understand
    you have 2 walk thro this concrete hell 2 get 2 heaven
    i'm a hustler, but i feel horrible for givin the fiends that resien
    bangin da 5 although P-i-5f's means seven [letters]
    i know that when i'm feeling helpless and weak i'm actually being washed in strength
    the higher power will never give you so much that you will break
    A strong person can cry. A strong person can pray for what they know they cannot have.
    A strong person can feel so beneath themselves, but a strong person must find the power to laugh.

    Life must bring you pain, to appreciate the joy, the happiness and when...
    you find yourslef in those times of pure darkness,

    you will feel joy again.

    :insane:
     
  2. Yemoja'sGoddess

    Yemoja'sGoddess Banned

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    Just wanted to show some luv, I feel intrigued by your flow... Keep it up

    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    understanding...wow this peice was hot
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    flo on poet!
     
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