Black Poetry : Understanding

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Understanding
    That we are real,
    flesh and bones,
    we bleed, we feel
    Realizing
    What has occurred
    was the vision ever clear
    or was it always blurred?
    Fearing
    That despite what I've learned
    when the fire is out of control
    I'm bound to get burned
    Feeling
    As I do, river running infinitely deep
    deeper than the bottomless pit
    where the waves of our auras seep
    Yearning
    To discover even the most mundane,
    wanting to know your story and glory
    the pleasure of life as well as that pain
    Knowing
    in my gut, in my core
    that God makes no mistakes,
    love shows me all the more
    that perhaps I truly am...
    understanding
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    intent to da core , listening knowing
    most the time one will understand
    i hear ya here sistah .
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    you seem to be channeling some spiritual quest right in thru here watz..
    I pray the DEVINE lets you see how you are graced with that presence inside of you..and that your understanding only aids you in your creative poetic quests...
    understand? :lol:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking within to the core reveals much Rich, even that which doesn't make sense on the surface. Thanks for the read and response.
    Digging even deeper than usual deepy. Thank you, I hope the Devine lets me see as well.
     
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    I too think you always do know, deep down. Sometimes you know up top, too, but not always.

    Bangin scribe, sister.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you gempis, sometimes the mind is scared to fathom what the heart knows deep down.
     
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    indeed once deep to da core u will see it all and make it come together
    in time sis......
     
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    Some things take time to clearly see, and other things are clearly seen, but they are veiled. True Rich, true.
     
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