Black Poetry : Understanding

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Dec 6, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby... I understand I've hurt you so

    I'm disappointed in me too

    We can't explain the wrong we do

    I played the fool to upset you

    Angel... excuse my foolish pride

    But, understand the man inside

    This should have never gone this far

    In life we're all a superstar

    Understand... haven't a clue

    Out of the blue (I love you, Boo)

    Understanding is a tool

    Everybody ought to use

    Let's make it happen

    Here's to y-o-u

    :toast:

    Works for me

    Should work for you

    Understanding (please forgive)

    Best of friends?

    It's real again!



    1poetsought ~ 2003 copyright
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed feelin real again
    this was awesome read tyte write brutha
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree with $$Rich$$
    nice flow
     
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    :rolleyes: Such a Gentleman Poetsought Is.....





    Hey gentle ....between reading from brotha carmelpyon......

    i saw this piece here and i just had to respond......


    Like i said before Youre Poems are deep and beautifull...
    and because i am dutch i can not alway,s understand everything that you are writting
    but this One got.........To me easaly

    it was beautifull.....


    I,m planing to leave the place here for a while to study more english....
    in that way i can read more from Other poets (likeyoures).....even if they are deep with gramar..

    Its more easy for me to write a poem...cause at home i translate it to english...i have my dictionary book there.......than when i come here i post it....
    but to read a poem it always takes more time cause than i have to look up some words..
    but anyway...
    i love this piece here...




    Love l
     
  5. triniti424

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    this was butta my brotha :)
     
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