Black Poetry : Understanding..Yeah ok

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Miss Understanding Mz Dayum Nice
    See I always been your friend right or wrong
    Never let harm come to you as I took nothing out of nothing
    And built something so we could make it
    Right at the start..Funny how you forget
    But you can’t see that for you have a one-track mind
    Thinking it takes a man to make a woman
    I took your ish the cussin the fussin
    The name callin and all.....and stay
    Miss Understanding Mz Dayum Nice
    As I listen to your lies of what you wanted
    When you really didn’t want nothing
    But to make my life a living hell
    And you want me to understand
    I understand ya bull….
    I understand you’re not true to yourself
    I understand you're a liar at his best
    I understand you’re not strong enough to have a woman like me
    My mind runs deep as my thoughts
    Which always go over your head
    Knowledge is power in which you have none
    Yours is pure stupidty
    But yet you can't see
    Summarizing what all should to be
    Living a dream never coming out to meet reality
    Gave you light when all you seen was dark
    But yet and still you think I should understand you
    And you dont understand me
    Trials and tales is all I was put through
    Then you think I am to kiss ya….
    To make you do right by your kids
    I guess that makes you feel like a man....which kind I dont know
    When I need that friend just to talk
    Where were you?
    When I need your shoulder to just cry
    Again where were you?
    When I was hurt an alone sad unable to feel
    Where were you?
    Did you notice?
    Hell do you even dare try to care?
    Seems you fail to realize I have feelings
    But now you say understand yours….
    For what?
    Do you know I am human?
    Then again are you?
    Or were you just born with out a soul?
    You know the devils child just with flesh
    That let stupidty stand in your way to do right by me
    Well it don’t matter for I gave you your walkings papers
    Now you’re acting dumb saying you understand….
    Miss Understanding Mz Dayum Nice
    Left a few years ago.....didnt you notice
    Or was you to blind to see?
    But you understand....I bet you do
    Only because you got them walking papers…..huh
    If they never came to be…I guess I still be the fool
    Living in your little warp world
    Playing ya little sad games…..
    Well a toast to you aint ya happy
    Because I sho glad I woke up when I did….
    Now ummm....
    Sign on the dotted line….

    (C) 2004
     
  2. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was feeling this.This Miss Understanding Mz Dayum Nice lady you bring is a trip yo. She was lucky to have this person around her that long. Evidently this person looked up to her and didn't want to disrespect her but um..... it's just too bad that she didn't see it though. :spin: :rolling: :wink: :toast:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    krazelyricks..thanks for the reply....happy ya likes but its only a write
    one of mzblkangel creations.....
    the opening of a mans eyes when ms understood then
    had enough and he finally seeing it.....thanks for the love

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't know why he wouldn't sign, cause he gave everything up a long time ago it seems. Let his concience continue to eat away at him, as well it should. You've flowed right on past this foolishness. ^5 on this.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa you through it on that one. its hot flows like its more than a creation
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    Telllllllllllll it liiiiiiike it isssssssss. :D

    :thanks: for sharing your poetry with us.

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up i feel ya here speak on!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love family on this one

    peace angel
     
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    Ummm ummm ummm! Sometimes ya got ta hang that niceness out to dry!
    It seems, no matter how much you polish a turd, it will never get that shine.

    Awesome drop Sis! :grouphug: :luvv:
     
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    :idea: Somtime you have to place your foot up somones @zz before thy realize what the reality of a situation is! Flow on poet and let it flow! I liked this twist and turn! :read:
     
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