Quiet Poetry Lounge : Understanding Her Vibe (Are You Feeling It, Returned)

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sensing her vibe….across the lines that
    Transmit the link between woman and man
    11:53 on a Thursday night
    & I find myself recalling her question-

    Are you feeling it yet?…

    ‘Feeling what?’…was my naïve reply,
    But I knew that she meant-

    the deep burning…fire everlasting…transforms into a
    yearning, for her taste, touch, feel, smell,
    soft lips devouring my skin,
    broken cries escaping her throat,
    as her hands guide mine, down to her thighs,
    not just for my pleasure, but because she needed to
    stroke rub caress me in(to her) so on nights when we’re apart
    she could feel my presence still

    I close my eyes….or do they close themselves…and hear

    Baby…Are you feeling it yet?

    & to myself (because she’s long gone), I say

    yes I feel it…wish I could relive it….take her back
    to the time, when I held her from behind,
    her warm body against my chest, kissing her shoulders softly,
    my hands massage her breasts….Oooh, to hear her sweet voice
    moaning loud and solidly, unwavering,
    savoring the feel of my lips against her neck,
    transporting mind and soul into our bodily unification,
    1+1 becoming 1
    and not only just to please her,
    but more because I needed to
    feel taste breathe her in(to me), so on nights when we’re separated,
    it can easily be stated that

    Right now, I’m feeling it…

    And **** it feels good

    (Again?)

    Are you feeling it yet?… Baby…Are you feeling it yet? Right now, I’m feeling it… ****
     
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    the deep burning…fire everlasting…transforms into a
    yearning, for her taste, touch, feel, smell,
    soft lips devouring my skin,
    broken cries escaping her throat,
    as her hands guide mine, down to her thighs,
    not just for my pleasure, but because she needed to
    stroke rub caress me in(to her) so on nights when we’re apart
    she could feel my presence still


    VERY descriptive... beautifully crafted work... and the "1+1 becoming 1"... that was a stroke of genius... i can't give you the feedback i want now cause i'm not awake--really, i'm just pretending to be--so i'll wrap this up...

    *thumbz up*

    thank you for postin this :D
     
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    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    KentuckianKween,

    Thanks for the response....the feedback you gave was wonderful, and I appreciate the praise. Much love!! Keep on wearing the crown, and representing as a black queen :)
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well thank you for failing to mention that
    this is actually a take on MY piece "Are You
    Feeling It Yet".... (LOL)

    & actually... it is very **** good!! i'm glad
    my words could inspire such a fantastic scribe.

    OneLuv.
    E~
     
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    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    E. (Sunshyne on my cloudy days)

    You know that it takes a fantastic scribe to inspire one....and the love is mutual :) Keep shyning

    M. ( A Tarheel Poet with some Georgia roots...lol)
     
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    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To Those Few Who Didn't Know

    This poem is actually my interpretation of "Are You Feeling It" by supreme poetess, the scribe that always finds a way to journey into your mind....Ms. Georgia Sunshyne :D.....I was to that I should give credit where credit is due....so, E. without your brilliant poem (you do know you're brilliant right?), I never would have been inspire to 'understand your vibe' Keep it flowing, because your work touches all.

    M.
     
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    things emotional

    you have a talent for painting vivid pictures with words- that's not easy to do- you also use language flowingly well to deliver your message in unforced rythms-that is even harder to do well- I enjoyed this.

    JAH Lives.
     
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