Black Poetry : UNDERNEATH

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  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ice clinks cool over hollowed out ribs
    frigidly melts with the heat of my breath
    dripping sweat, shimmering in the moonlight
    I taste you and you moan under me
    you are mine and i remind you over and over
    it doesn't matter who we are with
    or what is going on in our lives
    we have possessed each other for a decade
    under the fiery prints of each other
    blood coursing through veins until
    we explode at or with each other
    breaks of amicable silence fill rooms
    until the stares burn through clothes
    imprinting into my soul and we bounce
    its how we do and you know everything about me too
    down to the ticklish spot no one ever finds
    which leads to rivers flowing
    leaving oceans we giggle over later
    on days when I think about ropes and ladders
    jumping from bridges and holding down more than
    is even possible, he is there, to remind me
    i am superwoman and I remind him later
    i am his woman as I moan underneath his voice.
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nothing wrong with being "underneath," however, i'll be the one applying the ice.:)

    knowing your mate...and sharing the joys and pleasures that comes with that.

    nicely done.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho ya right !!!......enjoyed this one
     
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