Black Poetry : Underneath the Christmas Tree U & ME!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Underneath the Christmas tree, the best gift is you and me.
    A gift that you gave me all year long.
    Loving me well and loving me strong.
    Sharing your time your laughter, your heart.
    And this first Christmas together was just the start...
    of a beautiful love story that gives me joy all year.
    Full of the wonder of Christmas cheer.

    Underneath the Christmas tree, cuddling like kittens you and me.
    The glow of the lights sparkled all through the night.
    As we share our love in a love fevered flight.
    Ornaments dropping and rolling to and fro...cause we were
    busy giving ..."well you know!"
    Lusty and vivacious my wrapping comes undone.
    Happy that this Christmas you are the one...
    Who brought me more joy than any childs toy.
    No misletoe needed, we kiss at will.
    And even the wind was keeping still.

    Underneath the Christmas tree, pine needles sprinkle our bodies.
    As we sip from each other the warmest of toddies.
    Gifts get smashed by the roll of my ***.
    And even Santa couldn't get pass.
    Stocking stuffing and egg nog, nogging.
    Snowflakes go un-noticed by you and I.
    This frolicking delight brought a tear to my eye.
    I was finally happy with my "all year guy"!
    You are my hot chocolate with sweet marshmallow.
    I wish for every woman such a wonderful fellow.
    Loving this Christmas like never before.
    With you I know this Holiday will never be a bore.

    Underneath the Christmas tree, the best gift of all
    is
    U & ME!

    BJS (c)2003
    :luv: :luv:
     
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    oh my sister this is a wonderful flow..under the xmas tree...mmm...yeah what a joy:)
    sounds like fun...nice one here
    Peace
     
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    i likes this....
    under the christmas ....
    yea do sound likes lots of fun
    nice flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i be the package wit da red bow and nice ribbon
    un wrap me and let's roll & steal da night away !!
    dis was tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
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    Thanks fellow scribes for feeling this Christmas vibe!

    Just wanted to share a lil Christmas vibe for all my fellow poets and scribes.
    May you feel this Christmas cheer all through out the coming year.
    Merry,Merry Christmas!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi msluciousb :angel1:,

    Everything you described in your poem is what I'm longing for this Christmas....I had a ugly Christmas last year...boohoo...boohoohoo...boohoohoohoo :crying:
    Sorry for the drama hahahaha :)

    But your piece makes my fantasies vivid....hihihi
    I'll keep on hoping that my X-mas gift for next year will be a special heart wrapped in love-ly ribbon :spin:

    Merry X-mas to you (in advance)

    moham
     
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    Whoa, I guess this was so hot, you didn't even notice those pine needles sticking you, huh? Loved this.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hahahaha!

    Moham- Dear scribe , keep hope alive, last year mine was sucky..
    now this year I feel so lucky...what a difference a year makes.

    Watzinaname- Yeah, funny how good lovin will make you oblivious to every
    thing around ya! LOL

    Blessings On Your House! ;)
     
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    Merry christmas b .....w/peace & love
     
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