Khasm13 : under the sun...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    feeling the hot humid heat in waves
    between my bare toes rises the green grass blades
    the light surrounds me in a consuming cascade God made
    standing here...out in the open...away from the shivery shade
    my mind is in a trance and tranquil...cause the world seems to be at a standstill
    i fall to my knees and kneel...thankful for this day...and time to relax and chill
    life seems to move along from dawn to dusk so quickly
    today in the sun i'm 32...when night falls i'll be 50
    the Lord's gift to me...is the constant thoughts of you with me
    sharing the sun...knowing the fun has yet to begun...feeling your the one
    i hope this day is never done...me and u one day making love under the sun...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the mask of day
    sweetly open for
    two souls sharing
    let da day be forever
    tyte drop bruh !
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sweet tight...enjoyed this one
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    A brilliant, favorite son under the Son of Man.

    Is there any greater evidence of God?
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flowed like pure sunshine brotha. Made me smile....
     
  6. Khasm13

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    thanks fam...
    i truly appreciate everyone of ya'll...to da max...word
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Oh...Oh...Oh...Oh...Oh...:cry:

    Khasmmmmmmmmmmmmmm :cry:

    See...this is what I'm talkin bout

    and this is why I'm the president of the fan club...

    This piece gave me the feeling of actually kneeling, barefoot in that grass...

    Your style and words were so poignant...it was as if they leapt from the page

    directly to your readers heart, mirroring those deepest desires of love...supreme

    that everyone secretly aspires to attain...

    Poet...Poet...Poet..., you keep me at the alter...

    See------------> :bowdown:

    I'm going to coin you an official religion...so we may all follow the path
    of the "Khasm"....


    Encore...Encore...Encore... :hot:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW....so poignant...

    *signing up for the fan club DVD* ummm soul sister does dis come wif his half nekkid poster too QQ

    oh hehehe hi brotha khasm jes basking in the strength of the effervescence that is...YOU :bowdown:
     
  9. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    effortless flow on this one, you brought me there and the picture was vividly clear. great scribe poet.

    Lyr1c
     
  10. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    khasm..khasm.
    fluid, wonderful imagery
    and this softness...fabulous...
     
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