Black Poetry : Under the sky

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Upon the ocean shores
    In black sand…
    Under the skyz of love
    His brown caramel lovin…
    Seduce me in….
    An enhance my yearnin
    Luring me slowly……..
    Rivers of red lace
    Intertwine with white
    Blow through the wind
    His tongue slide across
    my golden tone
    Thick lips….release
    Honey as he dip
    Swayin to my hips…
    Dancin……
    Twistin
    Fancy treat
    Royal beat
    Loving the heat
    As we prance
    In time….holdin on
    To his bald head
    Releasing the river flow
    As the rain pours…..
    He took me to this world of
    Purple mountains
    Ruby kisses
    White skies
    Flying high on the
    Sweet embrace of him
    Gentle loving he gives
    Upon the
    Blue oceans….
    Sailin the white skies
    Floatin on
    Hand in hand
    Walkin in togetherness
    Compassion ally
    Upon the ocean shores
    In black sand…
    Under the sky of love
    We move up and down
    In sink as one
    Pink and red flowers
    Bud as
    Yellow scents
    Roam as
    Orange melodies
    Play…..
    Caressing my being
    And holding
    My innocence
    His love feeds
    …………….. my soul
    And nurtured ….
    ……………..My spirit
    Placed in heavens arm
    He search my garden
    And taste passion fruit
    Releasing
    Gold streams
    Sounding
    Silver bells
    Upon opening of
    The morning flower….
    Upon the ocean shores
    In black sand…
    Under the sky of love
    :hot:
    2004​
     
  2. UniverSouL

    UniverSouL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful poem mzblkangel.

    i love the way this poem flows and that you didn't make this a seexually explisit poem. it's good as is.

    great poem Poet!

    keep rockin' Sistah.

    peace to you and yours always,
    SoulUniversoul/Universoul
     
  3. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Woah...

    Mz Angel diz got my mouth waterin
    (go figure)
    lol
    dang, i ain't got nothin ta say...
    sounds like
    pure bliss

    one
    /antar
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    under the sky?? ...more like under :flame: :flame: 's :spinn:
    wow...what a way to float...under the wings of love :flirt: ...that's a cloud I wouldn't want to leave.
    so beautiful this poem...you always keeps us waiting for more.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    this poem is very beautiful...expressive...and in-the-moment. You are a very in-the-moment type of poet.

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    The visions here tempt us into wanting to float away to this carefree embrace, very soothing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful creativity this was sweet
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

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    UniverSouL...thanks glad ya likes

    Antar.... :laugh: ya mouth waterin huh thanks for the love
    ya made me smile :luvv:

    queentswana....thank you for takin time to read and reaply love your lovin support my sista :luvv:

    Monetary....in-the-moment...mmmhmmm thank you for the support on dis :luvv:

    watzinaname...glads ya likes

    $$RICH$$...thank you for your support my brother coming from you i know i did a A one job.... :luvv:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    hold onto dat baldhead then...lol
    tyte piece....
    one love
    khasm
     
  10. NicoleM

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    nice work madam wordstress...very nice...NicoleM
     
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