Black Poetry : Under The Left Breast

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  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UNDER THE LEFT BREAST

    Under the left breast, the left pap, set apart
    Lies a throbbing artery; signs of a beating heart
    Expanding and contracting; it thumps and convulse
    With a very human rhythm, as from there, I take her pulse
    Doing so with a kiss against skin warm and sweet
    Feeling the throbbing artery, giving way to heart beats
    Hands pressed against her buttocks in a squeeze of soft rage
    Feeling the pumping of her heart, with my lips against her ribcage

    Under the left breast, tender feelings to remit
    Underneath the underside of her left tit
    Is a pulsing artery through which the river of life flows
    Encased in a feminine form with an essence that glows
    I embrace her, with her back against my chest, without guile
    Her soft sweet *** resting against my stiff erectile
    Touching that part of her ribcage, with a gentle press
    Feeling her heart as it reveals its secrets in a heartbeats confess

    Under the left breast, the treasure chest of womanhood
    Is more than just a soft mound of flesh that feels warm and good
    With a nipple erect,... intentions understood
    She holds my hand as I hold her breast, entering the rear as I should
    Penatrating her passion fruit, slowly moving in and out
    Her hand gently gripping mine as I move smoothly about
    Touching her in the places of femine sex appeal
    Stewing in the moment of a slow **** and nice feel

    Under the left breast I feel her pulse getting frenzied
    While I'm working at making her p*ssy busied
    In and out of her flower, I pollenater her
    Bringing her closer to climax, I concentrate her
    She cums on my maleness and says my name
    I cum in her twatness, and do the same
    Then we both lay back, her resting on my chest
    My arms embrace her, with my hand under her left breast

    Written by:K-JiO
    (c) 2001
     
  2. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Daaaamn!!!!

    Let me be the first to say...this was Tyyyyte!!! So creative and indepth. This is da bomb...i really like dhis... Yeeeaaa!!!!
     
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    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GS99 graciously bows to shaneak
     
  4. Destee

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    whew Garlicsalt !!!! :devil:

    you make me hafta turn the air up in here !!!!

    *hot*

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Garlicsalt99 hands destee a church fan, so she can cool off :shades:
     
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    I must admit

    this be tha SCHITT!!!!!!

    beautiful garlicsalt


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    My seriously tight scribing brotha!!

    Only you can speak it like this
    And bring it in the form of orgasmic poetry!!

    Soooo Sooooo Tight!!!

    *nipples*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOOOOOOWEEEEEEEEE!!!!

    DIZZZZZZZZAMMMMMMMM!!!! MAN.
    G~SALT YA SLAP SUGAR ON TOP OF DES ONE
    TOOOOHOTTTT!! BUT STAY ON DA SPOT
    YA HEARD ME!!:hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
     
  9. garlicsalt99

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    Garlicsalt graciously bows to alyce, and knods in the affirmative to Hunter and RICH
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Salt

    my left breast says THANKS. I love your work!!!!!
     
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