Black Poetry : Under My Skin

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Under the tan copper tone
    Underneathe the clothes
    Underneathe the flesh and bones
    My soul is free and high
    My soul is surreal and shy
    My soul is, is a soul that prides
    Itself in character
    My soul can't deny
    That Underneathe
    The pretty face
    And when you're not paying attention to my race
    My color
    Or ethnicity
    I'm pretty sure
    You'll find reality
    Underneathe My Skin
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was short and very very nice. Reality beneath your skin! That's deep to me!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    skin deep truth speaks........nice flow
     
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    nini08 Active Member MEMBER

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    loved it!!! i think quite a few people need to read this one.
     
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    nICE pEICE. pEOPLE HATE wHAT THEY dON'T uNDERSTAND. wHAT MATTERS iS wHAT rEALLY lIES bENEATH. hOTEP
     
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    the soul is the only thing that will survive in the end. I'm sure thats where reality is. Tyte scribe Desert
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice. I think that's where all the best stuff is.
    feelin ya!
     
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