Black Poetry : Under My Skin

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  1. daya

    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My eyes are full of tears......... My heart feeled with sarrow...
    this pain I have with-in is so Under My Skin..........
    I feel so far away from anything I not sure were I'm going or were I've been........... Under My Skin.........This house, These Bills,
    This Man, These Kids......Under My Skin....All I feel is pain with-in
    My hopes, My dreams trying to be free......That will never be .......
    I look for a clue of what to do... But all I see is nothing staring back at me.....Under My Skin........ Is this all I see I need to see a part of me.... A part that's lost ....Under My Skin... My skin is soft my face is preety but so unsure about me.....I can't understand
    how people can say,that I am preety all day...I am unsure of my-self....and that is bad I know,but I feel as if I'm under a strong hold.....Under My Skin.......That's what I see I hate not thinking that I am a Blak Queen......Under My Skin.......I keep trying to say to my-self that there's people with less weath...
    I hate when My children have little clothes I don't wan't My family to know.........Under My Skin........ I hold so much...
    I just wan't them to know that I'm not that strong....
    Under My Skin........ They think I am STRONG but I really need them in order to carry on.....Under My Skin.......
    I run away from My family so they won't see me doing bad,
    I know that's wrong, But as a Mother at 13 I feel I was grown...
    And on my own....I've allways took care of My children...
    I wish I could do it again from the begining.....
    Under My Skin..... I need to be set free of all these demains.....
    I need a hand for what I have done, Raised myself and 2 sons...
    Under My Skin.... I have wen't from a Girl to a Women...
    I hope to turn my Son's into Men and to be blessed in the end........

    .........Under My Skin..................
    I have to become strong in the end:heart: :heart:
     
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    DAYA DEAR

    Under your skin,
    You're the best that you've- ever been...
    But under your skin,
    No one else can feel- too akin...
    Cause under your skin,
    You're the best Daya, you befriend...
    Under your skin-


    1poetsought ~ :heart:
     
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    under ya skin
    lay da beauty of ya soul
    and how u teach child
    with mind of gold
    under ya skin
    is a fate of rapture
    so pure and free
    let not ya worries
    ova throne thee
    coz i see deeper under ya skin
    a Queen
    indeed know one feel
    what u feel
    yet understand ya plan
    deep under ya silky skin
     
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    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the reading of my poem I was really deap this morning
    I was in another world called reality.............

    Thanks for you're words they mean alot to me Peace...
     
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    .........Under My Skin..................
    I have to become strong in the end - Daya
     
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    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks 1poetsought for really getting every thing I have wrote in this poem
    Peace---Always your girl Daya
     
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