Black Poetry : Under My Skin

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  1. daya

    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My eyes are full of tears......... My heart feeled with sarrow...
    this pain I have with-in is so Under My Skin..........
    I feel so far away from anything I not sure were I'm going or were I've been........... Under My Skin.........This house, These Bills,
    This Man, These Kids......Under My Skin....All I feel is pain with-in
    My hopes, My dreams trying to be free......That will never be .......
    I look for a clue of what to do... But all I see is nothing staring back at me.....Under My Skin........ I s all I see I need to see a part of me.... A part that's lost ....Under My Skin... My skin is soft my face is preety but so unsure about me.....I can't understand
    how people can say,that I am preety all day...I am unsure of my-self....and that is bad I know,but I feel as if I'm under a strong hold.....Under My Skin.......That's what I see I hate not thinking that I am a Blak Queen......Under My Skin.......I keep trying to say to my-self that there's people with less wilth...
    I hate when My children have little clothes I don't what My family to know.........Under My Skin........ I hold so much...
    I just what them to know that I not that strong....
    Under My Skin........ They think I am STRONG but I really need them in order to carry on.....Under My Skin.......
    I run away from My family so they won't see me doing bad,
    I know that's wrong, But as a Mother at 13 I feel I was grown...
    And on my own....I've allways took care of My children...
    I wish I could do it again from the begining.....
    Under My Skin..... I need to be set free of all these demains.....
    I need a hand for what I have done raised myself and 2 sons...
    Under My Skin.... I have wen't from a girl to a women...
    I hope to turn my son's into men and to be blessed in the end........

    .........Under My Skin..................
    I have to become strong in the end:heart: :heart:
     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel so sad,
    for what you have to go through.
    but the choices you made,
    all came from you.
    i want you to know,
    that life is no simple task.
    don't be afraid,
    to answer questions asked.
    i am not a mother,
    but it must be hard to be one.
    because from what i've read,
    you haven't had any fun.
    you were so young,
    when you started the game.
    i hate so much,
    that your the only one to blame.
    i am here for you,
    just add me as a friend.
    i don't know how much you appreciate it,
    but i'll stay here 'til the end................(add me as a buddy)



    -with deepest concern,
    lilcherry76
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt ........motherly love
     
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