Black Poetry : Under Her Spell

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, May 27, 2005.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With delicate powers in vogue

    Noticing her was a forgone conclusion

    Embracing her strength compulsory

    Bewithched and forever enchanted

    Manhandled my intentions

    Intermittently driven by passion

    Her mind takes me to new extremes

    In inexplicable gothic ways

    She possesses knowledge

    That transforms a man

    I needn't put on airs

    But can't go without

    Useless struggle ~

    In too deep now,

    I'm hers...


    Darryl Abdu Omari ;)
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    captivation of heart !
    i like the way u drop this one it had the right depth
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drawing you in closer, the magnetic force is so strong, resistance is futile. Tight piece 1poet, flow on.
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nicely done piece.
     
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    :jump: this is flavor indeed.... :cook:
    I fell u my brother!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks, for thinking about it.
     
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