Black Poetry : UNDER HER COMMAND...

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Bid me as u will
    i'll do to please
    bid me loveth
    i so will giveth
    upon thy soul
    bid me compromise
    my heart will stay
    in everlasting
    bid me ponds
    and oceans i'll bring
    to bath u tenderly
    whatever thee asketh
    i so will do
    under her command
    bid da soul
    my spirit will keep
    safely
    protected in my embrace
    as i am in yours
    command my love
    forth it never wilt or die
    i so fairest thy home
    where love dewell strong
    through her command.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bid me what you shall
    and I will make it so
    Ask me for love
    and I will love you
    within thy core
    Ask me to understand
    and I will wear your shoes
    and walk a mile within them
    Ask me to envision
    and I will wear my
    third eye proudly
    Whatever thee ask
    I shall do
    with trust
    with the belief
    that you have thine
    best interests at heart
    and my essence
    in thine soul
    As we join hands
    eternally
    The love abids
    under his command
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Take me
    i so will come
    lead my heart
    my love will follow thee
    complete me
    so i am whole
    through da grace
    of thy command
    i am of u
    as u is of me
    that we are one
    Ask me again
    forth i say yes
    where true love abid
    under her command
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For I shall take you
    where ever I go
    And you shall
    take me
    within thee
    For I remain
    under thine command
    And together
    we are
    of one heart
    and mind
    Request my all
    and I shall again say, Yes
    True love is steadfast
    under his command
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Direct me
    and i shell move
    call me
    i so answer
    to thy command
    like a spellbounder
    of love
    i will follow u
    through your heart
    and share souls
    by command of her
    to say yes
    ask me again
    by de-man-'d
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Dimples thank u sweetie
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :flowers: for $$RICH$$ & watz
    Beautiful words from two beautiful people.
    Absolutely lovely you 2.

    Much Luv
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice piece poet do as they want keep your pen flowing player
    6.5/10
     
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    Thankz a million sista 4EVERLUV and brutha Tantrum
     
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