Black Poetry : UNDER da TREE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    At the base
    of my heart
    my love peak
    where cares
    are kept so sweet
    the beauty of
    my love seeps
    into your soul
    to keep
    blessed in my arms
    is yo body
    as i cover it in
    grace and place
    u inside my beings
    i know of your love
    and felt it before
    but today i seek
    da depth of it
    on thew outskirt
    of my sunkiss
    let us not wilt
    under this tree
    but forever be
    i love u . :kiss1:
    :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was sweeter than sweet, as I comfortably sat and took in the words under this tree. This overflowed with warmth brotha.
     
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    comfort lay under the oak tree
    so i sit and soak it up Thankz
    a million sista for the visit.......
     
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    As I allow myself to be visually and mentally under the tree in my mind all I cant think of is the good time that this poem is describing.

    Excellent post keepem coming bruh!
     
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    thank u very much as this comfort me in warmth
     
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    i love when you do that....for i lay in your arms inside this poetic ride

    Angel
     
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    be still as i take u there , Thankz Angel for the love & visit
     
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