Black Poetry : under cover of raindrops...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Raindrops
    Trickled off the roof top
    (relaxing)

    I sat
    Staring out the window
    ‘til she walked in
    five feet eleven
    and luscious as
    HELL YEAL
    I was taken aback
    By the sound of her voice

    “I’m into digital photography.”

    The movement of her hips
    Held me captivated
    …her lips
    Left me salivating

    “My work is very unique
    that’s what my clients like about it.”

    I thought about all the things I could like
    About a Chicago-bred hottie
    Who couldn’t see just how beautiful she was

    “I do weddings, graduations,
    family reunions, and thangs.”

    She continued
    But I didn’t hear what she said
    …too distracted, was I
    by the sway of her head
    her piercing eyes
    touched cords inside me
    triggering unexpected reactions
    I didn’t see (coming)

    Are you married…involved
    …in love with another?
    Are you happy with that brutha?

    This Alicia Keys look-alike
    Was ravishing, indeed
    Making a brutha wanna fall to his knees
    (and beg)

    I wanted to touch her
    To make sure she was real
    A baby-faced grandmother
    With sex-appeal

    As dem raindrops
    Kept trickling
    Off the roof top

    I sat there
    Listening to the drip-drop of lust
    Going knock…knock…knock
    Upon my…

    Hmmm

    I couldn’t stop
     
  2. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DAYUUUMMMMMMMMM !!!!!!!!!

    Baller dear this was off the HOOK !!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Natasha :toast:
     
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    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hahaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! lovin it, Mr. Baller! LUV - ING- IT! :heart:

    Shade
     
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    Now See...
    there u go again....penin' them
    extra-ordinary pieces...I'm diggin!

    Nice work baller....

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    b.


    fantastic imagery... as usual. :)

    its like i always say... i love that thang...
    that you do wit words, my dear!

    itallLove, chile...

    elayne.
     
  6. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my sistahz...

    THANK YOU.:)
     
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