Black Poetry : Undefined...

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  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A bender of light and sound
    He is a glass blower
    He makes things…(((shimmer)))
    Creating masterpiece melodies of the soul
    with amethyst swelled in his lungs
    He breathes… He breathes… He breathes…
    Fire and Wind
    …until hearts skip beats & stop
    And then he speaks…
    Clear~~~~~Re-start

    A consciousness…that looms
    Like the ash of volcano
    It is inescapable and indisputable
    You will have awakened…
    Inoculated
    Able to rebuild with the tools
    of luminescent beams
    with the strength of steel
    Yet as mutable as water
    Because water is survival
    And because… “His Cause”
    …is for our people
    Black people…

    Hallowed be his Blackness…
    And kingship and warriorness
    He is a teacher…
    A candle that loses nothing
    By lighting other candles
    He is the “blue” of the flame
    And the blue of the sky
    The blue…of ocean
    And the blue of a mood
    Sometimes…

    He is….beautiful

    and red
    hot and even abstract
    or colorless
    In that…
    He can not be defined
    Not totally or even wholly
    But…Holy and upright
    A consistent thesis of thought
    and
    …..desire
    Caught in the crook of your smile
    or the magnetic strike
    …..of dimples
    It’s hard not to love him
    Was it potion number 9 ????
    or some kinda voodoo spell
    With chicken bones and cowrie shells
    Beneath some bayou blood moon
    Like plant life reaching for the sky
    I sometimes mistake him for the sun
    And lean in…
    when he walks by
    Catching rays of African Pride
    That beam from within….((( him )))

    For he is undefined…
    Like…aurora borealis
    Creation and God
    …the most unsolvable equation
    He is…

    He …just is
    One of the most pleasurable acquaintances, I’ve ever made.


    He is
    ………..(((( Monetary ))))



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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was sweet , beautiful and well pose'd
    wow ! i really love and enjoyed this piece.
     
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    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Them Peoples is Back, Has The Poetry Forum Re-Awoke From It's Slumber?/
     
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    wow..

    ... thanx for the breath of poetic life.

    l aint jealous yet :jam: , but don't tempt me :D
    jk

    peace.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have so missed your writing. So rich, and laden with expression that makes one pause to take in the whole of it. Long pause....... So wonderful to be reading you again.
     
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    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sage

    You just keep me in awe.... I love reading your works. :heart:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A GREAT TRIBUTE

    MO' MONEY!!!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    THANK YOU.....

    ((((((((((((((((((((((((((( ANGELICSAGE )))))))))))))))))))))))))))

    Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

    I must thank you for the kind words you have bestowed upon me. I, like so many others, am in awe of your gift...your gift of poetry. To use that gift to express how you feel about me humbles me deeply.

    I thank you for seeing me as I truly am...for not a lot of people get to know me this well although we speak daily.

    Again, thank you.

    GOD bless you, Love.

    :heart:

    :kiss:

    :grouphug:
     
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    He truely is all this and more....very nice scribe enjoyed this read....thank you for sharing

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now I am searching for Monetary poetry in search of inspiration. This was tyte. I loved the color and colorless images. Especially,

    "He is a teacher…
    A candle that loses nothing
    By lighting other candles
    He is the “blue” of the flame
    And the blue of the sky
    The blue…of ocean
    And the blue of a mood
    Sometimes… "

    This was beautiful.
     
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