Black Poetry : Uncover my soul

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uncover my soul
    Feel my spirit reach out to yours…
    Hold me close and
    Taste my heaven…
    Don’t need the two-dozen roses
    Just you will be fine….

    Uncover my soul
    Touch my inner woman
    Make me go crazy
    Do it to me
    Tell me how you like it
    How you want it….
    Just do it to me…..

    Uncover my soul
    Awake the woman in me
    Dont think about it
    Time to be about it….
    Uncover
    .................Uncover
    ………..My soul
    Feel my spirit reaching for yours
    Give it to me…

    Within our fantasy land
    The passion lays
    As our mind's plays
    Touch me here and
    Touch me there
    Notion set
    Make the move
    Tired of talking about
    ...............Feel
    As my soul closes into yours
    Feel my essence
    Release the woman in me
    Just give it to me…
    I wanna feel you
    I wanna smell your scent
    Send me straight to heaven

    Uncover
    Uncover….………..My soul
    Feel my spirit reaching for yours..
    Give it to me…
    Uncover my soul
    Feel my spirit reach out to yours…
    Because tonight I am yours....
    Touch me
    ...............Uncover
    ..........................my soul

    (C) 2004
    Poetry by an Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very sweetly posed
    feeling the uncovering coming down
    tyte drop
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah i like this one.. i was funny tho.. cuz as i was scrollin down i expected to see rich go then u ... maybe yall can do somin bout my vision.. but yeah ... enjoyed da read mba
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a passionate flow, very nice drop.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love yall
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok this was a very nice drop here! LOVELY , BEAUTIFUL, and It's All You MBA. :flirt:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the support python....i guess its all me..maybe not
     
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    NicoleM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your poems are so vivid...love paints pictures & poetry turns pictures into words that paint pictures...
     
  9. triniti424

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    *singin* some people need 3 dozen rooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooses thas the only way to prove you LOVEEE themmmmmmm
    hehehe had to get that out the system LOL
    very romantic my sista :)
     
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    Lovelly...Lovely...Love-LY!!!:}

    As a Brotha who has , "at times", little faith in love
    as commonly defined, this winked at me...and who knows...Naw!!!
    Who am I kidding...Nonetheless, this is about you and your Gracefullness
    with the pen... Very, very poeitcally expressed...One Love Sista
     
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