Black Poetry : Uncontrollable

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, Jun 14, 2005.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dont know what to do w/these feelings i have 4 u.
    I sit here n reminsce, memories making me happy n sad @ the sametime.
    Wonder if u've forgotten me?
    Seems like u have n thats ok.
    But my heart hasnt forgotten n i dont know what to do.
    All i want is some of ur time n 4 us to talk again.
    If ur heart doesnt love me or care 4 me nemore, then there's nothin i can do.
    My only choice..to finally get over u.
    It's just kinda hard when u fall in love n that person was there 4 u.
    I wish i never loved u.
    But my heart chose u.
    What am i supposed to do?



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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are the captain of your ship, so the controll is in your lap...
    there's always another door.
     
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    When you're going through it, it seems so unbearable. We can only deal with what is, not what should have been. I felt this poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep within yet a light shine look to the left and move that way
    to control fate
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx alot for the love fam. i creep in from time to time, always lurking in the backgrounds. to all the poets, keep doing y'all thing.its seems like im always strapped for time trying to become a professional writer.