Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by triniti424, Dec 1, 2003.
oh my goodness sister
the tragic tale you have unfold
eyes wide open
as it has indeed touch me
got to embrace who we are
with out shame but with pride
this is a deep heartfelted
thought induce flow
a pencil will not erase who we are
and white out won't work either
much love and respecct
triniti424, This is a sad but true message and at some point in time we need to really look at ourselves in this surrounding, for it is not home, too much conflict on a daily basis. Hopefully, we can take this to heart and make changes for our future survival.
you captured the essence
of the brunt of our issues with
this well told sad tale...
trin...this board needs your wisdom
please share more...i aint to proud to beg
nice to see you back, sistah. this is raw and beautiful at the same time. just dope.
Peace to U triniti424!!!
let the souls say ashey, ashey, ASHEY!!!
this flow is so on point!!! i like ur words, da picture u paint
the MESSAGE... u let sank (a lil country ) right into da dome!!!
i pray u keep letting these words of wisdom flow like a river...
peace & blessings
very deep and the sorrow of this flow
wow!! my heart reach out at this moment to
any brutha & sista
I echo every word that was posted before me, this is truly a wonderful piece that opens the mind.
Very nicely done, indeed.
the thinner the blood
the stronger our people will be
is a fable
like a scooby doo mystery
check out the scene
cause it can get kinda grisely
where ya going
lawnmower man mowing
for prescribing to the notion
dat greed and lust
are the magic potion
to part lifes ocean
but instead you end up on a cot
wondering how your body will rot
not believing in you and yours
has you at the hospital dead on the spot
before a single blood droplet
splatters on top
of the concrete pavement
every night i pray to the Lord
please stop mental enslavement
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