Quiet Poetry Lounge : Unconditionally…..

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 4EVERLUV, Aug 1, 2006.

  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im luving in a different zone
    that’s all my own
    Wanna give what I got and it may not be a lot
    But its mine
    Tender luv beyond what you can grasp
    A commitment of eternity everlasting
    Beautiful mornings watchin’ the sun rise
    sensual nites filled with passionate tides
    Wanna comfort and luv be there to rub and hug
    All ya cares and worries away
    listen to what you got to say
    doesn’t always have to be my way
    We can comprise those I’s to we’s
    Share something so complete
    Not tryn’ to harp on past mistakes
    wanna live in the now
    not last week last month
    or even yesterday
    Life’s too short to waste our time on what
    Is already behind you or me
    Tryn’ to create a bond that’s stronger
    That extends longer and longer than what
    Your eyes can ever see
    Im here for the long haul baby if you need me
    all you got to do is call and Im coming
    Wont let nothin’ stall me
    cuz your important
    And I luv you unconditionally
    don’t wanna change you
    I luv you just the way you came to me
    perfect imperfections, mind so intellectual
    the way you make me smile
    sometimes I feel like a little child
    with a new toy
    cuz ya luv brings me so much joy
    not tryn’ to feel any pain or play any games
    just wanna sail away with you
    don’t need a destination
    cuz I totally trust you
    does matter where we go or what we do
    my point is just to be with you
    Im rushn’ home just to get to you
    cuz all day long your on my mind
    and I just wanna spend some time
    with the one that sends chills up my spine
    you know Im not the timid or shy kind
    never have a problem with sayn’ whats on my mind
    beating around the bush is a waste of my time
    i wanna be exclusively the one you seek
    morning noon and nite
    Im your antidote and remedy
    coming to you upfront and honestly
    so you will never have a problem understanding me
    my heart is laid open
    luvin you
    Unconditionally….
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    there's not nothing more to add
    to the warmth u scribe i so loveth
    unconditionally this was touching
    all i can do is sit in awe !!!
     
  3. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's real talk, you show the true power of words in this piece. And also the power of the kind of love my parents and grandparents and hopefully one day I will get share for a lifetime and beyond. Flo on
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh luv girl this was positivily captivating
    beautiful and thought provoking
    i loved it flo on sis'
    much much love sweettee29
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kewl...

    :welldone:, Sister LUV...flow on poet, flow on...:spinstar:

    :picture:
     
  6. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks sista spicy for the luv. You are too kind.


    sweettee:
    As always sweetee you are sooo sweet.
    your continued kindness is much appreciated.

    choclatangel:
    Yes, unconditionally luv is hard to find these days.
    Everybody always has strings. But I know its out there.
    Thanks for the read and the luv.

    $$RICH$$:
    What can I say....
    Anytime you dont flo on one of my pieces
    Its a compliment to me, your kind words
    and encouragment is always much appreciated
    Thank you so very much.

    Much luv to you all...
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving one unconditionally...leaves no stones unturned, and a love like that, ..don't come knocking everyday, and certainly not in every-way.
    You can't hide it,
    nor
    kill it...
    for
    It never dies
    and thats
    :spinstar: UNCONDITIONALLY :spinstar:
    true!​
     
  8. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queen:
    Your words are so true. Thank you for the luv
    and visit.:

    Much luv to you.