Black Poetry : unconditional

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  1. pinkfighter

    pinkfighter Member MEMBER

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    i'm not much of a poet, but i felt like sharing anyway.

    unconditional

    it's hurting
    because of this love
    this love, doesn't allow rest
    constantly worried
    that i'd make u upset.

    i want to runaway
    runaway from your love
    but this love is my existance
    and i'm scared to parish.

    this love is unconditional
    yes i know, but to only please myself
    will leave u worry and is that fair?
    so i sacrifice for you just as you did for me.

    all i want is for you to be happy
    cause this life, i believe it's it
    god, u worship, confuses me
    so i live by my morals.

    and these morals include you
    and your happiness
    so please, when i fall
    don't worry, i only thought of you.

    i'm searching so hard
    but this materlistic world
    sometimes consumes me,
    but each time i fight myself out.

    i want to understand this world
    with this short life i have
    i want to feel everything
    not only to know the mechanism of this world.

    so while i search for myself
    be near me, love me unconditionally
    even if i don't end up like you dreamnt
    just love me, for me as i love you for you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and that's unconditional beauty of a love from within
    I love the flava of this piece keep flowing !!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To love someone for who they are, not who you want them to be, now that's some kind of loving. Expressed so well.
     
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    I think Unconditional Love is that thing we all yearn for. To have one's strengths and faults be accepted and be loved for good and in spite of the bad is truly a beautiful thing.
     
  5. pinkfighter

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    thanks for your comments guys! :11900:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome pinkfighter :wave: :)

    I always tell folk I aint no poet but I got poetic tendencies ;) lol

    I enjoyed the honesty and pleading earnest voice of this piece and I do believe you got that poetic spirit indeed :)

    Hope to read more :read:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello and Welcome Pinkfighter




    If we loved others unconditionally as we’d love to be loved, peace would surely reign. I'm glad you decided to share with us and I look forward to you sharing more.:)


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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