Black Poetry : uNcOnDiTiOnAl LoVe

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unconditional Love

    How many people have professed to love…unconditionally
    Then, three months later, to just up and leave


    They said that they knew…deep down in their hearts
    That you and that one would never, ever part
    That the love that they share would always be strong
    And, concerning that love…they would never do wrong

    Still…it didn’t last long

    ~ Is love not eternal?

    I’ve known, for so long, that I deeply love you
    And love, between us, would always be true
    As spring enters summer…and summer, the fall
    From nature’s restful slumber…we’ve answered the call
    And all of the good times life promised to me
    Gave birth to the joy of this future I see

    We didn’t mention to each other…the dreaded “L” word
    Didn’t bring it up…for fear of sounding absurd
    But we knew in our hearts that our love was true
    Each night I only dreamt of spending tomorrow with you

    I love the air you breathe​
     
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    Woo-weeee!

    You don't need to be up in here talkin' alla dis sweet talk like this!

    You are smooove, Brother Baller! :bowdown:

    This is that kinda rap that'll make a sistah swoon! But, what makes it so strong is...it's not game. ---It's your heart.

    EXQUISITELY LOVELY!


    And even if it wuz "Game," you make me feel like Bill Withers....

    "...But I wanna spread the news
    that if it feels this good getting used
    Oh you just keep on using me
    until you use me up ..." :)
     
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    Great drop Brother Baller, Yes, that's what's called unconditional love, being felt and shown walks circles around "being told" ...:toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    unconditionally awesome brother Baller
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if you're going to love...

    ...love unconditionally. without strings. without attempting to mode someone into what you want them to be. without demanding what they cannot give. love for the sake of love...and not for what you can get out of it.

    THANKS for reading.
     
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    But we knew in our hearts that our love was true


    ~Unconditional love remains true and timeless as the wind
    thru seasons change and torrential storms
    two hearts afire will carry on

    yes, love is eternal.



    romantically sweet, Baller.



    e:heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and if that love dost carries on

    that stemmed the tide...that swam the storm
    that all of mankind might come to know
    the lengths that true love might surely go

    i know...i know

    eternal.

    I THANK YOU, e.
     
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    LOVE

    I am the air that you breathe
    Is that not LOVE
    which is unconditional
    Every night while your dreaming
    I enter you while your forgeting to inhale
    I inhale on you behalf
    And when you wake
    And receive my conciousness
    You walk around conciously
    Forgetting
    That I am the air that you breathe

    But I reamain
    In this pain
    Providing
    To those who don't know me

    I don't suppose
    My LOVE

    could be any deeper.

    peace
    peace
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's deep...

    SO...
    allow me to inhale... deeply
    that i might...taste you
    your fragrance...like fine wine
    softly caressing my mind
    as you roam...uninhibited
    inside me

    let us be...one
    consumed by the warmth of love
    and all the goodness ever thought of
    when we come to BE

    consciously forgetting you?

    how could i forget that which nurishes my heart
    ...keeping each molecule of my existence from flying apart
    that i might see another day
    that i might be able to say...

    my love is true

    THANK YOU.
     
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    baller - Unconditional Love has but one test. And that test is Time. If it can survive that, it will have survived sad moments, happy times, missing one another, intimacy tribulations, denials, acceptances, money problems, loving embraces and even slaps in the faces. Get thru all of that and you've got some serious Unconditional Love that has value that neither one of you wants to lose and everyone else hopes to gain. Your words always provoke thought baller. Thanks for writing them. Namyh
     
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