Black Poetry : Uncharted Sand

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  1. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We walked the hot steamy sand
    A desert with only one way out
    You seeking a destiny never told
    No knowing if there is hope that
    Will unfold yet we stroll

    Blistered by the suns heart
    Empty dreams as life seems
    Unfulfilled and incomplete
    A transcendental tranquility
    Beyond reach we continue to seek

    Somewhere out here on the desert
    a transition between Thanksgiving
    and Halloween on the night of the
    clear full moon there is no shore no
    hidden door for water to pour

    You consider the possibilities that
    You should alter your turn for this
    Destiny you yearn but my course
    Does not require water I simply
    Thirst for life so sweet and eternal
    Peace. In a quiet retreat

    A promise of vineyards of heaven
    We have not yet walked on desolate
    Shores this I need more

    AqueenPassing
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  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    another beautiful poem....your very talented....
     
  3. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you very much LovelyOne, as well as yourself I am loving your flow also (smile)

    Be Blessed
    AqueenPassing
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhhh ! so warm and lovable dis was awesomeeeeeee!!
    flow head on Queen but don't pass me by !
     
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