Black Poetry : UNBREAKABLE

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bring me this peace that I have come to see
    Bring me to this River of Jordan that I seek
    Silently asleep beginning my journey
    But I awake with a roar entering they way
    Bound by a trust
    I long to be better
    I ask for the guidance
    even in this letter
    Teach me to uplift:teach:
    Please show me how to dance:dance1:
    I am calling and peeking
    I will be happy
    this is my last chance
    last moment
    I make it right
    I make it last
    I make this the fight:lift:
    Of Everlast
    Of eternity
    I make this your wish
    of undenying Faith and ability
    the triumph of Days :time:
    The war of the Lost
    We raise our Flag
    We sing the Grace
    So Bring me to the Mountain
    Bring me through the Cave
    Lead me under Sea
    And lets take flight
    Lets make this UNBREAKABLE
     
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    with such letter and gift of prayer no reason why u won't be granted
    thy wish to continue unbreakable
     
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    With a will this strong you could drill through the earth's core!! Admiring that power within you sis!
     
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    Hey PLATINUMILLITY1
    Wow! This poem is so divine, and it’s uplifting
    I just loved the line “Teach me to uplift”
    We all need to be more encouraging, we indeed need it
    Very tight drop. Much love

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this powerful piece

    could never be broken

    and you say teach you to uplift?

    i think you are already doing that

    with your work

    great piece
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SMH
    Bless Yall
    Many blessings
    I thank you so Much
    I appreciate your Felling for My Scribes
    Thank you :em3600:
     
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    AWESOME FLOW, ILOVE THE FEELIN OF THIS POEM.
    FLOW ON POET.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Mo Much That Girl!!!
    You Kow I like that Word ......Hey Now...LOl
    You Stay Awsome!!!!:love:
    :10200:
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY:
    Nothing but POWER in this piece.
    Diggn' it 4real......



    Much Luv
     
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    Beautifully written.
     
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