Black Poetry : Unbreakable Woman

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unbreakable Woman (revised)

    Spiritually uplifting
    Incessantly giving
    Virtuously living
    Queen mother, divine is she
    Blessed from above is she
    These blessing she passes to her progeny

    Self-empowering, self-sustaining
    Yet never selfish
    Family always maintaining
    Her they truly relish
    Strength of character
    This is what defines her

    She is the woman that is every woman
    Because it’s all in she
    She puts up with the egotism of man
    And she proves herself more than what they expect her to be
    Her delight is to see her sisters growing strong
    To see women as a strong army can never be wrong.

    She is Child rearing
    God fearing
    Faith having
    Wisdom gathering
    Bible reading
    Spiritually immersing, all her days, in all her ways

    Woman in all her shades and colors
    Woman unbreakable
    By the will of others
    Woman unbreakable
    No matter what you throw at her, she will rise to the occasion
    Woman unshakable
    She is the emotional solution for the logical equation
    Blessed woman unmistakable
    Woman unalterable
    Woman sociable
    Acceptable, woman unbreakable.


    Nahshon-Rae 10/17/13
     
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    So I revised this poem because I felt it was missing something...I think the changes gives it a little more life...
     
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    For seeing into the "heart" of who & who's we are ... I thank you my brother, thank you soooo much!:)
     
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    Gracious, I am grateful for your kind words they really mean a lot...
     
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