Black Poetry : Unbelieveable

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  1. sexe1

    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Even women like me who say
    they don’t need a man become
    lonely at the height of the night
    craving for, if nothing more than
    companionship. But all the real
    fish in the sea have been eaten
    up or migrated and all that is left
    is a cesspool of dirty bayou piranhas
    and sewage that the unworthy
    women had left behind. And as it
    approaches me, I'm trying to
    understand the unnecessary
    ling-ho that this brother is trying to
    spit in my ear. But it's getting redic,
    so I drown him out with my thoughts.
    As I am thinking I wonder...If we have
    relations before you are able to
    understand my position, in the world,
    as a woman, in the words of my sister...

    What If the F**k Do We Have To Talk About??

    In my eyes you are will be nothing
    more than a flaming pile of feces unable
    to even get my spit to ease your pain of
    burning. Did it even occur to you that
    after you get to know me.....you might
    not want to smash or for that matter
    even like me...but the lack of thought
    on your behalf hath made you tarnished.

    Back to reality...as I slide down the street
    listening to Jill's lyrics..."you love me, especially
    different..." I lower my head and the tears
    begin to roll down my face...I reminisce
    about when I felt loved and loved back
    only to be let down with lies. I used to ask
    why, but if you will lie about anything...you
    will lie about everything, so I dismiss mere
    words and rely on what is concrete. Then
    I remember that I am a child of God and I
    raise my head my tears flowing heavily...
    Telling myself that God will send the right
    one someday, but in the back of my mind
    thinking...why did I have to go through
    the pain?

    Then it occurs to me that depression
    has got the best of me...this is
    the third time this week,
    Unbelievable
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    depression

    relax
    sit
    rest
    sleep
    let go mixed emotions
    smile
    and know ya free
    do it for me ..............wow!!:rolleyes:
     
  3. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Being open makes one stronger and vunerable at the same time.
    For those of us who have someone, we walk tenderly upon your lines in this poem, realizing that we can wind up in this very situation.

    Then
    I remember that I am a child of God and I
    raise my head my tears flowing heavily...
    Telling myself that God will send the right
    one someday, but in the back of my mind
    thinking...why did I have to go through
    the pain?

    I don't believe God wants you to be in pain while you wait.
    This is a great time to strengthen your relationship with Him.
    He truly is the "Lover" of our soul.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sexe1....


    gurlllll!! you betta hush!!... i am feeling you so much...
    ryght now!! it is as if... someway... some how... you
    got into the recesses of my soul... & started scribing
    your *** off!! :) thank you for this!!

    AlwaysPeace&Love.
    SunShyne~
     
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    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks you for taking time to
    see my view of life...Rich, Joyce,
    SunShine....thank you for your
    comments...they are appreciated
    :eek: