Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Jun 15, 2004.
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Dang Ma!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was straight fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm speechless and thats all I can say. "Folks lets go to a commercial...: YOU did it on this one sis. One love
whoaaaaaa!! str8 off da hook sistah
u created a masterpiece here
They are right...this is a masterpiece in itself. All storms must thunder, until they reach...the "Secret" ...
And the "Secret" sits in the middle...and knows.
This is a nice poem.
It's so strange, angelicsage, because just this morning I was thinking about this very issue. I know we are on the same wavelength a lot, my sister, but this is crazy.
This line is my fave: Making choices to improve the Black Tragedy…
You are incredible, my friend. This is just a stunning piece of work.
Girl! You need to be published and when or if you are, let me know so I can get my copy! You are sooo talented! This is TRUTH spoken beautifully.
You know sage, this piece reminds me of where I spent part of my growing up. At one point, the neighborhood became a drug haven, and folks used to always say that I didn't "look" like I lived around there. Or that I didn't "seem" like I lived there. There is no one way to be Black, no more than there is one way to be white. Didn't mean to go off on a tangent. Your work here just fills the air with Black pride. Props for this one, sister.
Very nicely spoken.....Blak should be Excellence....and it iz
not mediocre nor attracting negative attention....
it is positive progressive
Peace and Blessings
Prophetic...Much love and Much Thanks...
You already know I'm in awe of your skill, One love
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